chilliconcarne (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} chilliconcarne) wrote, |
Yeah .. having multiple critical readers would be good. Kribu is willing to play plothole police, but doesn't believe her English to be good/native enough to play language police (the silly woman!)
My sister offered to be a critical reader in both aspects. However, as she needed literally 3/4ths of a year to read through the supershort version of this story I gave her a year ago ... I think that is one pain in the butt I shall avoid. Also, she thought that the wandlore in DH made perfect sense.
My sister offered to be a critical reader in both aspects. However, as she needed literally 3/4ths of a year to read through the supershort version of this story I gave her a year ago ... I think that is one pain in the butt I shall avoid. Also, she thought that the wandlore in DH made perfect sense.
